My Fantasy Creature
July 20, 2007 — Timothy
As a gush of wind blew through my bedroom window, I got out of my bed to close the window. After closing my window, I hop back on my bed to go back to sleep. As I slept, I dreamt of a miraculous dream. It was about my family going to the museum of natural history. But when the bus came to a stop, we weren’t at the museum. We were at a cemetery. My family approaches the bus driver, but he is no longer there. Suddenly we see a light at the cemetery. It was a bonfire. But who lit it? All of a sudden the ground shakes. A head slowly rises from the grave. After a moments time, the body has fully risen with snakes sticking out of its head. The bodies’ fiery red eyes glared at me. As the mysterious body continues to breathe, I start to hear a creepy hissing sound. It’s a snake from inside the mouth! It was a mutated zombie! My family takes a step back. Suddenly, I am awakened by an alarm. It was my digital clocks alarm. What a nightmare! Or could’ve it been a real happening?
July 24, 2007 at 9:31 pm
Hiya Timothy,
I love your blog it is so cool.
Nice post but I tink you should describe your creature a bit more. Here are 2 questions:
What is the time of your story?
Where is your story set?
Please answer
Naomi
July 25, 2007 at 10:37 am
Hi Naomi,
The time of my story was at midnight.
It is set in my imaginary bedroom!
Thanks for the comment, I really appreciate it ;).
August 1, 2007 at 11:11 am
YAY! Third to comment. Cool post and blog.
How was it a miraculous dream when there were mutated zombies?
August 8, 2007 at 11:28 am
It started of as a miraculous dream, but then it turned into a nightmare due to the freaky zombies!
August 8, 2007 at 11:46 am
How did you feel when the zombies came out? And what do you mean by mutated zombies? By the way nice blog!
Ramiz
August 8, 2007 at 11:50 am
YAY! Fifth to comment! So thats how it is.
March 17, 2008 at 8:12 pm
I like your made up thing it looks awsome good luck with the future